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Love this observation, Jeff, and what a sentence!! You know the writers’ phrase Kill Your Darlings? This is like: ok yeah, I’ll kill them but then I’ll electrocute them into something else entirely.

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You have provided me with the topic of tomorrow's post. Thank you, Katie!

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ooowwweeee!!

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That is a superb sentence! And a great lesson drawn from it.

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I have run a good intention into the ground. We have to find the place where faith and risk shake hands. Once the leap is taken, it should sort itself out during the freefall. That’s where the creation of zeal is, free falling.

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